Hi Jocob!

I'm sorry that you must waitwaited such a long time for my e-mail, but I had manylots of exams and a book to read in this week and. I was so busy!
In my schollschool I have a new girl in my class! Her name is Jenny. She came to my school onea week ago, and she is so friendly and kind! She has got short, brown hair and blue eyes,. Jenny isn’t tall. She looks very firendlyfriendly. In my opinion, she is clever and nice,in. In the future, I want to make friendfriends with her.
In nextNext month my school organiseorganises a trip to London! My parents said that I can go, so we have aan opportunity to meet again! DoCan you believe!? I'm so excited andbelieve it? I can't wait!!wait, I am so excited!
Write back and tell me what
do you think about itthis.

See you soon
,

John

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