The sun burst through the clouds, it. It was a golden globe in the sky and was melting hot! The crowd walking past me, and the busy street, made for aan even more humid climate. I did not have control over my own body, as I was being shifted by the moving crowd. myMy head was as hot as a frying pan. I feelfelt like all thethe whole population iswas on thethis road, creating a chaos.
Women
cancould be seen more in number. There iswas not a single shop where thethat a crowd iswas not seenfilling, and everybody iswas in a hurry. There arewere jewelry dealers which deal, dealing in brightly shining gems, and fabric dealers. Hawkers do awere doing great business. Tourists were also seen taking pictures.

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