1. Mexican Policemenpolicemen are forcing Ryan (45) into a holding cell in the middle of the night. Ryan begs them to let him go, telling them that he needs to go back to the hotel to his wife and kids.

2. Ryan is in his fancy office
, meeting with his partner, Paul. Paul asks him to go and check a real estate deal in Playa Del Carmen, Mexico. Ryan resists saying that they have enough work in the U.S. Paul insists,; he believes that it is a great deal.

3. Maya (16) is in her
Hip Hophip hop dance class,. Martin (16, black) is dancing beside her, he. He is excellent, Maya notices.

4. Martin
passpasses by Maya and her friend, as they leave the dance studio, . Maya looks at him, smiling, May's. Maya's friend disapprovedisapproves.

5. Ryan picks up Maya at her high school after dance class. On the way home, they talk about her boyfriend, John
, the quarterback. Maya says that John is a big show off.

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