Hello ,

ThThis is Mekenzie Anderson and I have some personal things to tellshare with you. MyFirst, my great grandfather passed away away on the 10th of April, and thatwhich was mythe reason offor not being atin class for the padspast few days. My great grandfather's passing was very sudden and I had to leave and goto be with my family for a few days.

I don't know ifwhether you would like for me to learn the dance that you posted on Facebook.Facebook?

That
wasis not only thing I had to say. I want you to know that I am in love with dance itsdance! It's my everything. and iI try to stand out to you and get more help, but iI get no feedback from you and that, which makes me work harder, but itthis still does not get your attention, sir. I would like to know what i canI should do to receive your feed back, because iI respect your opinion and would like help to improve my dancing. I look up to you as a dancer and I love the way you put emtionemotion into your dance and i. I would really like to learn from someone like you.

Mekenzie R Anderson

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