Hello Fred,

I have tried to simplify my story as much as I can. Please note that I have been havinghad this idea for two trimesters, and I was waiting for the studio to bring it to life.

I have used a similar synopsis toin my Screen Design class, before two trimesters ago and made a title sequence out of it, but it is much morevery different now with all the elements completed. It is complicated, I know, and needs so much work, and with. With your help, I think I can make it simpler and more understandable with fewer events happening in the story.

I still didhave not figurefigured out the title of the film, and I will definitely figure itdecide after I get the feedback from your side.
Please find the attached document of the story.
The document contains the following: Idea Synopsis, Treatment, Characters, and, The eventsEvents.
Thank you for your time, and I am so sorry for the delay.