AAfter a day or two, everyone who went to the mountain that day has gottengot very sick and has gottenhad many dots on their body. And, and had to stay home. But Jordan and Michael have gottenwere in the most pain. They have gottenhad scars everywhere, and were bleeding from every inch of their body. and haveThey had been coughing blood, and been hearingheard a voice like saying to jumpsay, "Jump!" and saying it’s, "It’s all your fault that everyone is suffering." Eventually, the teens heard something very painful. The voice had gottengot very mad that they were not listening to what she iswas telling them to do. So the voice got in their headheads and controlled them and made them hang themselves. The parents came in after hearing the screams of their children. But as the parentparents took one step into the room. The, the voice goeswent right into their brainbrains and sayssaid with a dark and wicked voice.”, "This is your children’s fault - they made everyone suffer pain. You should die for bringbringing them ininto this world." and aAnd in the blink of an eye, the parent’sparents' heads were cut off, theand both of theretheir heads were layinglying on the floor. CarpetsThe carpets were as red as a (something). After the screams that happenedhad happened in the house. The, the neighbors comecame rushing in, and seeingsaw on the wall, written within blood where the family dead in said, "That’s what uyou get for destroying my home, so now you don’t get to have a home."

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